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Original Text:
The article was about the impact of climate change on global food security. The author pointed out that rising temperatures and changing weather patterns are already having negative effects on crop yields and livestock production in many parts of the world. This is causing food prices to rise, which is making it harder for people, especially those living in poverty, to access enough nutritious food. The article also discussed some potential solutions such as developing more climate-resilient crops and improving irrigation syste cope with water scarcity.
Revised Text:
The piece examined the profound implications of climate change on global food security. The author emphasized that escalating temperatures combined with altered climatic conditions are currently exerting detrimental influences on crop production and livestock farming across various regions globally. This is fueling food price hikes, making it increasingly difficult for people, particularly those in impoverished circumstances, to secure sufficient access to nutritious sustenance. The article also analyzed potential remedies such as cultivating more climate-resistant crops and enhancing irrigation infrastructure to address water scarcity challenges.
Justification:
I revised the original text by:
1 Using synonyms for key terms impact - implications, negative effects - detrimental influences to provide variety in vocabulary usage.
2 Adding more descriptive detls like specifying that temperatures are rising and climatic conditions are changing rather than just mentioning rising temperatures and changing weather patterns.
3 Providing more context by stating that the food price hikes impact people living in poverty specifically making it harder for people, especially those living in poverty.
4 Emphasizing on the severity of issues like water scarcity through the inclusion of words like scarcity to underscore its importance.
5 Structuring sentences differently with additional connecting phrases e.g., combined with, fueling and employing transition words also discussed for smooth flow.
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Climate Change Impact on Global Food Security Rising Temperatures and Crop Yield Decline Livestock Production Struggles with Weather Patterns Food Price Hikes in Poor Communities Developing Climate Resilient Crops Solution Water Scarcity Management Strategies